Today we had an awesome Kiwi Sport Session because we had extra time, thanks to Room 10.
I had a great time playing games with others and working as a team.
Please give me feedback and feedforward.
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Hi Raena, It's your friends Paris and Frances here... We really enjoyed reading your reflection on basketball. ONe thing we loved the most was how you added in the 4 types of passes and the 3 types of dribbles in your writing. We also enjoyed how every sentence sound as if you used expression. One thing that we think you need to work on would have to be adding in the coaches name and how long the session was. Other than that, Keep up the Ka Pai work.
Kia ora Paris and Frances, I appreciate how you took the time out of your learning to check out my blog, Thank you for the lovely feedback and feedforward.
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Hi Raena, It's your friends Paris and Frances here...
We really enjoyed reading your reflection on basketball. ONe thing we loved the most was how you added in the 4 types of passes and the 3 types of dribbles in your writing. We also enjoyed how every sentence sound as if you used expression. One thing that we think you need to work on would have to be adding in the coaches name and how long the session was. Other than that, Keep up the Ka Pai work.
Kia ora Paris and Frances, I appreciate how you took the time out of your learning to check out my blog, Thank you for the lovely feedback and feedforward.
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