Unlucky Vocal Disaster!!!

UNLUCKY VOICE DISASTER!!!

WALT: Write using our 3 main focus which are punctuation, spelling and grammar.

I had to write a story with a scenario given to me and mine was "waking up with no voice, overnight something happened, write about your story"

“LIANA! Come on, we’ve got to go to the Music Awards” says Kayla “Coming”I reply, I look into the mirror, take a deep breath and think,  this is the day, the day I (hopefully) receive the New Zealand College girl Music award. We drive to the event, as I look out the window I see celebrities, families, supporters and my competition, Jakayla Williams, the all time winning music artist, pretty, talented, “ I love her voice” I scream “Liana, what are you talking about?” says Kayla with a confused tone “NOTHING” I reply “ your sister’s acting a bit weird today sweety! She seems quite timid” the mother replies, “No i’m just really excited.” All the girls are lined up waiting for the glory, I see my friends smirk faces in the audience, we all shiver with impatience, the host walks up and says “And the award goes to…. Liana Matthews! Congratulations, how does it feel to win the New Zealand College girls music award?” said the host, “It feels great, I’d like to thank my supporters especially my parents, without them I wouldn’t be where I am right now, Thank you.”

“Wohoo! It’s time to celebrate!” yells Taya, “Congratulations Liana, on behalf of all the girls here tonight we want so say we love you and will support you with your music no matter what” Kayla says “Thank you so much girls, I’m so thankful for this gift, and i’m glad I had the opportunity to participate in the collegiate girls music awards of 2016, Now let’s party!” The girls grab their food and beverages and snuggle up to watch a movie, after the movie we decided we needed more people to hang with.  So I called all the girls that I knew from the competition and invited them over. Jade Lewis, the High Pitch Angel, Chrissy Cullen, the stunning songwriter, Tasha the instrument champion, Tia & Nia Wilson, the strong harmony twin sisters, and Jakayla Williams the former winner of the Music Awards. The girls came over and we had pizza’s delivered, we played some games, had a quick sleep and went out for a stroll to the night carnival. We saw amazing things, we saw people doing cultural performances, Dance crews and best of all FOOD. Tia and Nia brought us hot foods, Jakayla bought the drinks and I got the dessert. We took our food home and fell straight to sleep.

When I woke up I was so hyped for today, my video shoot will be happening and I can meet my musical inspirations. I got up and noticed  Jade, Jakayla and Tasha were gone, they left a note saying they were gone for a walk. So I went to go have a shower, clean up a little and make a nice, healthy breakfast for the girls. I went to go into the room suddenly a snake jumped out of the bed, I SCREAMED AS LOUD AS I COULD, then came to find it was as silent as ever, I tried screaming again and again, Tia, Nia and Chrissy were sound asleep. I pushed and tumbled the girls round and round till they would wake up “LIANA WHAT DO YOU WANT?!?!” yells Chrissy I muck about, twist and turn and they still don’t understand, I run and get a paper and explain to them that I had lost my voice. Jakayla, Tasha and Jade come back and the girls explain to them what had happened. We couldn’t seem to figure out what had happened, My voice never gets lost so easily, I must have swallowed something overnight, neither of the other girls lost their voice though, I’m starting to have second thoughts on who I invited to this sleepover.

I need to get my voice back, I have a video shoot to attend today. I get in my car and drive to the doctors, when I am in the waiting room a couple of young intermediate looking girls come up to me and start complimenting my voice “your voice is so brilliant, I hope someday I can be as good as you” I use actions to thank them and explain how I lost my voice. They understand eventually and ask the receptionist if I could have an appointment, Luckily they had one patient that cancelled their appointment and I could go in, I went in and the doctor said “I’ve had a good check and its seems to be fine, nothing is wrong with you vocals... TO BE CONTINUED

Thank you for reading, The continued story of this will be coming shortly.

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Malaysia Facts

10 Facts about Malaysia 

• The Capital of Malaysia is Kuala Lumpur
• The official language of Malaysia is Malaysian/Malay
• The Continent is Asia

• There are 28 national parks in Malaysia
• The national sports centre in Malaysia is Bukit Jalil sports centre
• Malaysia has 13 states
• Malaysia's Population is roughly over 29 million
• The Malaysian flag is red, white, blue and white
• Nasi Lemak is a traditional food in Malaysia
• Malaysia's highest point is Mount Kinabalu

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WALT: Investigate China for Chinese language week.

I researched 15 facts about China for chinese language week and stated the one's that stood out to me the most.

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Bathroom Expectations

WALT: State the expectations.

Today I finished my bathroom expectations, this is a poster that might be shown to students at the school, based on the teacher's decisions, other student council members will also be doing the expectation posters.

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Corridor Expectations

WALT: State the expectations.

I recently just went back to complete my corridor expectations poster, I did this poster because at the moment the student councilors are doing the expectations to show the students.

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Rad Rhythm Reflection

WALT: Reflect on our learning

Today in the last block Caleb came to our classroom and asked if we would like to do a music lesson, because of the swimming sessions we missed our lesson due to time and the fact that all of the year 8's missed the session last week, fortunately the last block we were free.

First we started with a game called "Don't clap this one back" as a warm up and we went away and got our bins, lids and two drumsticks. Then we split the class based on the first letter of your name from A-K, then we did team 1 VS team 2 I was in team 1. We had to beatbox and whatever group was louder they won, The team I participated in won :) thanks to our loud mouths. After that we played leap frog, we put the bins into lines and paired up, we played three beats and on the fourth we had to jump over the bin. I really enjoyed our lesson and i'm glad  we will be continuing these lessons.

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Redbacks VS Tigers - Fact or Opinion

WALT Identify and resolve issues (Develop language and comprehension skills)

Today I finished my Fact or Opinion presentation. Ms Komor gave us a story to read called Redbacks VS Tigers and we had to answer the questions, giving our reasons.

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Swimming Lessons

WALT: Reflect on our learning.

Today Room 9 had the opportunity to swim at the panmure pools during school hours. At morning tea most of the students in Room 9 got changed into their togs and were getting organised for the fantastic swimming lesson, we jumped onto the bus with room 5 and had a fun, loud and crazy ride. 

They put us into groups, I was with Toni, Hereani, Irys and Kahlicia we were taught . At first for our swimming lesson we practised the basics, we did breaststroke, freestyle, backstroke and dolphin dive, they then decided if we needed to move into different groups

Me and Kahlicia then moved into a more advanced group and we focused on the speed and tidiness of our swimming, My favourite is freestyle

Next week I will be working on my breathing when swimming. I am looking forward to it next week because we will be swimming 6 lengths