Metaphor poem

Metaphor poem

My mum is a clown that makes me laugh
my dad is a cheetah who is very fast
my sister is a computer,smart and knows a lot of
information
my brother is spongebob, loud and funny
My cousin is a turtle, chill and mature
I'm a bird, who likes singing.

WALT: use metaphor language in our poetry writing.
For writing today I wrote a Metaphor poem, I used my own descriptive words for my poem, describing my family.

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